So I started on my comic book. I am posting some rough character sketches and the first page and would love some feed back. So this is my first time drawing comics. I have never really done this style of art, especially following a sequencial story line. I was hoping y'all could look at the first page and give me some feedback. Specifically things like what do you think is going on so far, what do you think the relationship is between the two characters, can you tell what all the drawings are (especially the food plate in the third frame), if the perspective looks ok and at least semi-realistic etc. I would greatly appreciate any pointers. My scanner sucks and made it kind of blurry and cut the edges off a bit, but I think its still pretty readable. Let me know whatcha think
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I need feedback on my new comics
11.13.08 05:36 AM
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02.22.10 09:37 PM
reply alert!
do you still make comics? because you seem to be really good at it.